Reviews for Cigarette Lighters and Paper Weights
Needa S chapter 1 . 4/15/2007
Great imagery and great ending as well. Awesome job. Write on!
Gabriel Lyman chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
maybe a little wordy, and has some flow issues as well as mispelling the word "dying" from Dieing... other then that its actually decent imho
not sure yet chapter 1 . 10/30/2003
*GASP*..whoa, i LOVED this, holy, the mood you set up was just amazing, out of this world, HOW DID I MISS THIS ONE?, its so sorrowful, yet that sad soft, calm kind of sorrow...i dont know, but ir eally love it, esp the imagery and the ending..it was heartbreaking, like, i didnt quite get the relationship until that last part, and i love the stuff about radios and songs playing..i dont know, music is such a big part of my life and it just seems to fit in perfectly with this one, very well written, only have to say that you put "dieing" when its "dying" but otherwise, nearly flawless in the wording, it has such a lyrical quality to it...i know im ranting and tired, but i truly got into this and loved it, excellent excellent job
Shadafakup chapter 1 . 8/13/2003
Ai, this is still good, to me even if it wasn't fantastic to you..

I liked the structure, even if the last line of the second structure didn't seem to fit in.. It was a good line, but a little detached from its stanza.. That's just my opinion..

Good rhyming, it was quite natural and it did help with the flow..

I liked the descriptions of the settings as well as the potrayal of emotions in this one..

The flashback leading to the present was great.. And the ending, with a twist was rather interestin..

Great piece, nice flow, and pretty good choice of words..

I enjoyed it lots..

Keep it going..

Shadafakup