Reviews for Hatred's Blossom |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic story! xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw this is sweet. It was also nice to read this from a guy's POV rather than a girl's for a change. A job well done! The ending is good too. Keep up the good work! Gulistanlik |
![]() ![]() ![]() i dunno. it's good, i suppose. but something struck me in your fic. can't describe it. maybe it's because i fell over heels about the boyishly confusion the guy was having and how adorable that he's really worried and nervous about the letter thing. and the thank you god.. the last line? yeah.. the perfect last line. |
![]() ![]() ![]() CUTE! |
![]() ![]() cute and meaningful- i love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's a little abrupt, and i think it needs a little filler... but it still cool! i luv all your stories, ... most of the romance ones at least... but this one is cool |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was an intersting story. I like the details and everything you put into the story. Nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome job! Well done! |
![]() ![]() Make this into a story. a long one. |
![]() ![]() haha!that was as hilarious as hell! awh man...no offence or anything...but yeah...it was refreshing...and mushy... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is very sweet...I think you should make it into more than a one-shot...I mean...this would make the perfect start to a longer story...anyway...whether you do or don't this is very cute...though...as an author I'd recommend going through and working on your phrasing in parts...thats the problem with first person...It's harder than third...anyway I clap and bow for you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i know i know, i shouldn't but i will: i think you should expand the story. but then again, there are oodles of love-hate-to-love stories and this is the central scene of such stories... well written, but i still felt like it was a bit too short, abrupt, and too many vague things in the air. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I mean...wow! I have to admit, well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know what to say, so I guess it left me speechless. I had to review though. I like it. It's sweet and different. Great job :) Flawless Storm |
![]() ![]() ![]() This one's also very full of feeling, sincere. It sounds like you got exactly what you were thinking down on paper. I wish that I could do that: it always comes out slightly twisted for me. Keep up the good work! |