|Reviews for Everlasting Dreams|
| Lhune chapter 1 . 10/31/2006
Today 2006 and this one dates from 2003...
It's been a while since you wrote this.
Still, I think it very good
even though I can see the improvement you made...
Both are you
(that sounded strange)
It is true I think
-love cannot be erased-
I wish it to be true...
sadly it can be (almost) forgotten.
I'm happy you still present us your works today -smile-
| A Boy Gone Mad chapter 1 . 2/14/2006
I liked the line "Dreams are nothing but intuition" - that could be a poem within itself.
| Don'tGiveUpSoSoon chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
AWESOME! Really good. great use of words!
| Nanners chapter 1 . 10/29/2004
*shivers* (Don't worry, the good kind of shivers!)
This is just really cool. "Love cannot be erased" is a really good line, and it's so true.
| joie 610 chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
that was nice :) pretty and hopeful ;)
"dreams are nothing but intuition"
| A Chroi chapter 1 . 4/5/2004
| TygirSky chapter 1 . 4/4/2004
I like how this one is structured, and the rhyme in the stanza's makes it almost musical, good job!
(oh, and and thx for all the reviews! see? im returning the favor _)
| The L1zard Queen chapter 1 . 2/5/2004
I like it
| cookeeemonster chapter 1 . 10/31/2003
that's really interesting to think about: dreams are nothing but intuition
| Drizzen chapter 1 . 10/30/2003
*claps* much better than the other ones cause its longer i love this one!
| Tiadaria chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
First, thanks for reviewing me!
Second, I thought this was a really good poem...and for some reason, the line "Dreams are nothing but intuition" was especially groovy to me.
Third, I only had one problem...the use of ellipses (...) should only be 3 periods...sorry about that...I'm obsessive about things like that though.
But it was a good poem, and I liked it a lot.
| burp chapter 1 . 10/14/2003
Excellent depiction of hope and love.
| swift sky silver chapter 1 . 10/6/2003
so you do use rhyme schemes... this was an enjoyable read. it makes me think0)
| Simon James chapter 1 . 10/3/2003
lol reading sure is fun :) and yes i just broke up... thanks for yuor concern..
your poems are very deep, im having to think a lot when i read them. this is good ;)
Very cool ideas and writing
| godawful teen-angst poetry chapter 1 . 10/2/2003
aw, this is so sweet...love the last line.