Reviews for unlikely
PlayMateMisfit chapter 1 . 8/13/2003
whoa... very well done - from my interpration, i can realte to the feeling. bravo,...keep thought on paper

AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 8/13/2003
Simple wording but so very beautiful. Good job.
Shelila chapter 1 . 8/13/2003
Weird... I don't really get it, but it's interesting. Keep writing!

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Lilith Dastalour chapter 1 . 8/13/2003
Oh, I love it!
Lazerponies chapter 1 . 8/13/2003
wow, very cool. odd, but cool. interesting choice of words and concept, overall great job, keep writting!