Reviews for BloodStreaked
RyomaPaola chapter 20 . 12/13/2010
Gah! Do you know how AMAZING this story is? I absolutely LOVED it. There are a few grammatical errors in each chapter, a few sentences/phrases with the wrong punctuation marks and a few sentences that seem to be cut, though. But honestly, I fell in love with Ms. Pierce. Gah, I love her surname-before she married Cole. I applaud you for this amazing story. I only wish to see Anita's story, not as a sideliner, but as a whole one.:)
starlight-angel88 chapter 20 . 11/12/2010
Great story! Loved it Haha.

Keep up the great work :D
Last Wish chapter 19 . 9/23/2010
I'm a sucker for happy endings and you gave me just that. The story was thoroughly exciting and cute at the same time. Definite favorite for me now :)
witeaya chapter 19 . 7/5/2010
a really interestingly amazing story!

who doesnt love romantic-action-well-written story?

at some point i started to believe that barbara will eventually be the one who will kill danny. but i never suspected nial to be that sick not until dylan and cole found him at the surveillance room. it's kinda suspicious how only him was there.
rosieroo chapter 19 . 7/4/2010
holy wow! that was an AMAZING story! i loved the storyline and the detail you put into it was awesome. you've done a VERY good job at creating a unique story with equally unique and interesting characters.

the twist was great as well! i suspected for a while that danny was one of the characters but then i dismissed it (and i had no idea it would be nial). so you completely surprised me!
Madison Clarke chapter 18 . 7/4/2010
i loved it. At no point did i lose intrest.
Madison Clarke chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
what would the how he died box read? 'kinky sex gone wrong'?
browneyedcolly chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
Greatly written
bubublacz chapter 19 . 9/7/2009
Nice! But wait, I don't understand I thought that Lila's mom was alive, I remember you distinctly saying that something, something to your daughter? Right? I hope that you really finished that, I mean made her mom reappear and also for the fact that I don't know what her real name is. So yeah... I guess that's it.

And oh yeah, before I found out about Nial, I thought that he and Anita would make a good couple too, if she and D won't make a hit.

And by the way, I really like your story, because you showed a girl who could kick ass, a psychotic killer (which was so cool) and that fiery, passionate-y love/romance/lust/sex that you've written down. I was rapt.
bubublacz chapter 7 . 9/7/2009
I'm getting excited by the turn of events!
bubublacz chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
OH my G! I can't help but squeal! I've been searching for stories like these, the ones with strong female heroine! and assassin types too! Gahh! I'm excited I hope that this'll be good!
Elmo'z BFF chapter 20 . 4/23/2009
finally finished it! awesomeness

n tears of blood looks interestn. but is it jst me, or did it say somewhere that the guy was dead for 8 years and counting, but one of his 'mistresses' are pregnant and is due in 4 months? did u mean that the dude has been dead 4 for 8 months? but i dnt c how that wud work eitha...?
Elmo'z BFF chapter 17 . 4/22/2009
holy shit!

Nial? well damn. who wud hav expected it?

good bloodi job :D
Zainab chapter 4 . 4/21/2009
story is pretty great so far. n i like cole. but for some reason, i dont like lila'z charachter. she sounds too heartless...?
Elmo'z BFF chapter 1 . 4/21/2009
whoa. wat a start. cant wait to finish it!
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