Gah! Do you know how AMAZING this story is? I absolutely LOVED it. There are a few grammatical errors in each chapter, a few sentences/phrases with the wrong punctuation marks and a few sentences that seem to be cut, though. But honestly, I fell in love with Ms. Pierce. Gah, I love her surname-before she married Cole. I applaud you for this amazing story. I only wish to see Anita's story, not as a sideliner, but as a whole one.:)

Great story! Loved it~ Haha.

Keep up the great work :D

I'm a sucker for happy endings and you gave me just that. The story was thoroughly exciting and cute at the same time. Definite favorite for me now :)

a really interestingly amazing story!

who doesnt love romantic-action-well-written story?

at some point i started to believe that barbara will eventually be the one who will kill danny. but i never suspected nial to be that sick not until dylan and cole found him at the surveillance room. it's kinda suspicious how only him was there.

holy wow! that was an AMAZING story! i loved the storyline and the detail you put into it was awesome. you've done a VERY good job at creating a unique story with equally unique and interesting characters.

the twist was great as well! i suspected for a while that danny was one of the characters but then i dismissed it (and i had no idea it would be nial). so you completely surprised me!

i loved it. At no point did i lose intrest.

what would the how he died box read? 'kinky sex gone wrong'?

Greatly written

Nice! But wait, I don't understand I thought that Lila's mom was alive, I remember you distinctly saying that something, something to your daughter? Right? I hope that you really finished that, I mean made her mom reappear and also for the fact that I don't know what her real name is. So yeah... I guess that's it.

And oh yeah, before I found out about Nial, I thought that he and Anita would make a good couple too, if she and D won't make a hit.

And by the way, I really like your story, because you showed a girl who could kick ass, a psychotic killer (which was so cool) and that fiery, passionate-y love/romance/lust/sex that you've written down. I was rapt.

I'm getting excited by the turn of events!

OH my G! I can't help but squeal! I've been searching for stories like these, the ones with strong female heroine! and assassin types too! Gahh! I'm excited I hope that this'll be good!

finally finished it! awesomeness

n tears of blood looks interestn. but is it jst me, or did it say somewhere that the guy was dead for 8 years and counting, but one of his 'mistresses' are pregnant and is due in 4 months? did u mean that the dude has been dead 4 for 8 months? but i dnt c how that wud work eitha...?

holy shit!

Nial? well damn. who wud hav expected it?

good bloodi job :D

story is pretty great so far. n i like cole. but for some reason, i dont like lila'z charachter. she sounds too heartless...?

whoa. wat a start. cant wait to finish it!