Reviews for BloodStreaked
Global Nomad chapter 17 . 12/24/2003
merry christmas! and i'm glad i feel so loved by people, some people just don't like me, horses. okay so they're not people but they don't like me anyways. and i think anita's cute in her seduction mode. and dylan should learn to live with it. i'm a bit lost for a bit in the chapter, i feel like i skipped one, did i? i think i did. or maybe i just don't remember. oh nevermind! it was a great chapter no matter what i mutter on and on and on and on about. i really like the way you write and i can't wait to find out what happens.
shoelacy chapter 17 . 12/24/2003
I love where this is going and I can't wait for the next chapter!
VenatrixNoctis chapter 17 . 12/24/2003
) Well done! lol i sound like those other ppl, but meh, it's what I mean. As for if I guessed it already or already know that I'm not gonna tell you! ) But really, it's very good. I *knew* being on Jupiter wouldn't be a deterrance. )
Paige chapter 17 . 12/24/2003
OMg I didn't think it was Nial at all.. maybe i wasn't pay enough attention. I love it tho... I hope it all ends up good... and to think.. Anita had him all tied up and everything. Oh man update soon cause i wanna see what happens next! :0)
Harsh chapter 17 . 12/24/2003
i didn't think Nial might be the killer until cole and dylan found him in the security room by himself... wow that was good!
i hope anita doesn't die... her and dylan are supposed to get it on!
hopefully you can continue their story in tears of blood... this one is elizabeth's story, right?
i'm officially addicted to this story again...
happy writing
GinaO chapter 17 . 12/24/2003
OMG! Thanks for the update. I was waiting and waiting. Gosh, Lila needs to open her eyes. And that cliffy was just awesome! It's him, isn't it? I can't believe it, please hurry with the next chappie. Excellent work!
FlyingPhish chapter 17 . 12/24/2003
holy crappage! O.o you caught me totally off guard. Damn you! Oh well, I must say that I enjoyed that. Yippee you updated. OK I must go and sulk now. .
icepie chapter 17 . 12/24/2003
...he was Nial...
I didn't even know until this chapter. Haha.. you got me. :)
Poor Lila... she just loved him so much she didn't want his life in danger.
Padfoot101 chapter 17 . 12/24/2003
woah, I was not expecting that at all, but that was great! I feel kinda bad for Cole and Lila because Lila is being a prick, but I guess I can understand. I just wish she would come around really soon. I also hope that Dylan is forgiving because I think he ans Anite belong together.
Well, I hope you update really soon! I can't wait to see what happens!
mo chapter 1 . 12/23/2003
enough is enough sandy ,now write!
Ellie chapter 16 . 12/18/2003
your story is a good one write more. you have a bit of spelling and grammar errors though. read through them again and correct them. it'll make the story better.
Hex Reedglimmer chapter 16 . 12/17/2003
Yah, we read the author's notes. At least, I'm sure some do.
Keep updating.
I.N.O.A.N chapter 16 . 12/16/2003
lol someone likes the bastard?
this is a realy good story, i've been following it for a long time now and i would like to say well done, not many writers can write that good. is this the end of it or is there more?
enchanted-littlelies chapter 16 . 12/14/2003
That was a great chapter. I absolutley love this story. Can't wait until you write more! Update soon! Keep up the great work!
shy chapter 16 . 12/14/2003
its looking good, and you're right he is an evil bastard,
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