|Reviews for BloodStreaked|
| mo chapter 16 . 12/13/2003
oh nice update and nicest cuz u put dylan and anita in, that was funny her giving him the silent treatment. Also seriously wana take lilas place. I like suspense building but i don't like waiting so update! soon! also feel so sorry for josh, nial and noah but so funny!
| Global Nomad chapter 16 . 12/12/2003
aw, that's not nice! i don't think i'm that person, am i? no but i love dyaln, i have a think about accents right now. but great chapter i loved it, what was with the tie again? i simply can't remember. and i'm sure this review means absolutely nothing to you because you get so many and i'm just one. but hope to get to read more soon.
| VenatrixNoctis chapter 16 . 12/12/2003
I *loved* this chapter (which I'm sure you've already guessed). I know I said that about your last chapter, but I love this one even more! You know why? No? Well because of your killer silly! I don't know how you got up all that nerve to right that Cole and Lila scene. I can't even get past the kissing in mine, but hey, no one's complaining. I loved Anita and Dylan's scene too. She's so funny ) Anywho, I've got it on good authority that this is gonna get even more interesting...and the killer better die a good death...so hurry up and finish!...or I'll just beat the ending out of Cory )
| Kase chapter 16 . 12/12/2003
I came across this story and I was intrigued by the title so I looked up your other stories. I have read them ALL! I absolutely love them. You have such a flair for writing and you are damn good at it. You mix romance, lust, suspense, and action so well. Each chapter is a veiled mystery and you keep the reader addicted. Even then, when the story is done, you have a teaser of another story. It's brillant! Simply brillant darling! Keep up the excellent work!
| AGreatYarn chapter 16 . 12/12/2003
hee hee hee. Love it. Can't wait till you update again
| Harsh chapter 16 . 12/11/2003
or back from hell, aka school.
I haven't read this in forever, and it's almost done!
You have successfully made the killer unlikeable, so congrats
i love all the action... anita'a awesome, poor dylan doesn't stand a chance!
i liked how you evened up the numbers with the last bit, fooled me and probably all of us, good on you
| Gabriela Binx chapter 16 . 12/11/2003
Hey great job. Please update soon!
| GinaO chapter 16 . 12/11/2003
WOW! That was a great chapter! I really loved it! The whole Anita-Dylan affair make me laugh and the last part was great with all adventure. This surely is one of your best chapters. I hope you update soon and I can't wait to read more of your short stories _!
| Minyaithwen chapter 16 . 12/11/2003
so wait a sec, I have one HUGE gap...is Danny dead or not? I'm sorry. I totaly missed that bit. Well, it was still great! You're on a roll!
| zagato chapter 16 . 12/11/2003
That was a GREAT chapter! I was really laughing and smirking when Lila and Cole got it on again. That psycho Danny is really mean and evil. Hope something really bad happens to him. Cool characters and nice plot here. Please update.
| mo chapter 15 . 12/6/2003
yes yes better late then never! seriously missy u people tire me out, getting up to go early to go to somebody else's school is not my idea of a relaxing vacation. Anyways i am back in my routine and yay! luved ur update, cole so cute ahh so cute, really i want him. lila's tactics very nice. hey u still haven't posted stuff about dylan and anita, comon work damit *breathe in breath out* also nikolas laughing and being sweet, its even more funny after reading ur story that involved around him. Anyways update, i know iknow u are bored with it but plz end it off so i won't be stuck in limbo forever like i am with two of anne's stories, anne if reading *hint hint*
| icepie chapter 15 . 12/5/2003
“Really, so what is this we have between us now? Love or war?” That is my most favorite line in the whole story.
This fiction is so amazing... and I adore Cole to the utter death. He's such a gentleman. It would be a shame if he turns out to be one of Danny's minions... (not to mention totally mind blowing)- I would probably be scarred for life.
| Minyaithwen chapter 15 . 12/1/2003
I love Landon/Leonora's relationship. and of course Lila gets points in the fight, she made me smile. Other than that, I have no other comemts but simply wonderful. Toodles!
| ChocolateStrawberriez chapter 15 . 11/28/2003
Great story! You should update more often though!
| Global Nomad chapter 15 . 11/28/2003
yes we are inching, but at least we're moving right? great chapter i loved it. noticed a couple grammar/spelling errors but if you were to reread the chapter you could easily find them yourself no problems. can't wait to see what happens!