Reviews for BloodStreaked |
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![]() ![]() Great chapter! I loved the Cole/Lila part. I can't wait for the real fight between Danny and Lila. Just to let you know, I do read your Author's notes. Happy Thanksgiving to you, too. Keep up the great work _! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this chapter! When you were telling me about the fight, I thought you meant fight as in Lila and Cole were going to be real mean to each other, but lol, me being me, I didn't pick up on your little hints that should have clued me in. Anyhow, I liked the actual fight. Both Lila and Cole are so incredibly witty(which makes you incredibly witty) and you know how I feel about the whole soup thing. It's so cute! Of course, the whole "sick, perverted bastard wants to fuck her as she dies" thing makes Danny all the more "entralling" as you call it.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! You updated! Great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens! |
![]() ![]() Awesome chappie, but a bit on the short side as you mentioned. Loved the Lila/Cole stuff. Now I'm anticipating the big showdown. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter. I liked the interaction with Langon and Leonora. Very amusing. Hope to see the next chapter soon, all this build up is making me excited. -Ivy |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey! im so glad you updated. no one's updating now and i was so happy to hear that your story's still going, lol. love the chapter, lilacoleutter sweetness. even tho a lot of their relationship is sexual ;) xoxo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I love the battle between Lila and Cole. Perfect love and war. The gang with Landon should come up with a good plan to help Cole and Lila. Each moment is crucial to stop Danny. Thank you for this chapter. Please update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was very good. I loved the sexy little wrestling match between Cole and Lila. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the sexual tension between Lila and Cole. That killer is very crazy. I hope he dies very slowly. Go Lila! Please update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is great...A nice story to follow |
![]() ![]() ![]() GREAT story! The suspense between that crazy killer and Lila is amazing..and so is the tension between Cole and Lila. Is Lila her real name,or is it yet another of her alibis? And didn't Danny die when the cottage burned down? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the story and the characters. Its really good and great that it manages to be humorous too. i wish the chapters came out faster, but you cant rush good writing right. not to mention busy people |
![]() ![]() yeah yeah i am late at reviewing but hey i read it the day u posted it but sadly tea crisis prevented me from the cole and lila thing was cute, when they fought well cole won but such a nice way to lose for lila, also dylan hmm i falling in love with him too and u better have more stuff on him and anita otherwise hmm no also the last line was soo sweet when landon talked about teh father daughter thing. Great update! update soon! no need to pass highschool use another year to finish it, for now just write.:D |
![]() ![]() I LOVE THIS STORY! I HONEST TO GOD LOVE THIS STORY! NOW I NEED MORE! PLEASE MORE! |
![]() ![]() Yes, the last line was good. The question is, how? Now, keep updating... |