|Reviews for BloodStreaked
| Lisa0211 chapter 14 . 11/16/2003
OOh oh OH, this is getting so exciting...you ahve to write more...like now...quickly! ~Lisa~ Great chapter btw
| Global Nomad chapter 14 . 11/13/2003
great chapter! i noticed only two typos but hey that's very good! the story's great too, keep writing!
| Padfoot101 chapter 14 . 11/12/2003
wow... this was good... really suspenseful... I just happen to have liked the parts with Cole and Lila better, but I think that I am just partial to that aspect of the story. I can't wait until you update again, and I hope that it is extremely soon. Good luck writing!
| Minyaithwen chapter 14 . 11/12/2003
I wish that I had a father like Landon... or maybe no, I'm a coward. But he had a great personality. I love him!
Anyways I really like this chapter. The only thing that suck out like a sore thumb was how in the "gentelman and lady" I'm assuming that it was supposed to be plural (I have no idea why that stuck out so much but it did.
Great chapter! wonderful job!
| VenatrixNoctis chapter 14 . 11/12/2003
Well well well...i see...lol you're so *bad*. I don't know how you come up with these things. I always loved Landon. Anyways, Anita is so funny and Cole and Lila are just *darling*..lol, yeah i said that.
| Mandy chapter 14 . 11/12/2003
Liked the chap, although there wasn't enough Cola/Lila interaction as I like ;-) I really am anticipating this fight between them and the height of the story.
| GinaO chapter 14 . 11/12/2003
I really liked the last line, too. This story is really thickening. Thanks so much for updating. I love this story! Keep up the good work! _
| mo chapter 13 . 11/11/2003
yes yes my update sloww, but it is the most important one! first of all in teh whole shooting her and then fucking her damn man thats mean and before that infront of ur mother really the guy has lost it! oh i like the anita bugging dylan that was cute and oh also the plan, that dylan and cole will make food :D that was hillarious! anyways great update, now u have my permission to write more!
| Blind Tragedy Wolf chapter 13 . 11/11/2003
Ah are you kidding me? that was great. I'm sorry this review is so short but my hands are sort of frozen..ahh its so cold..I'm doing the one finger peck its so bloody cold and I can't move. AH anyways I thought it was a great chapter. hurry and write the next X_x
-Dai G out
| zagato chapter 11 . 11/6/2003
Okay, I reviewed a lot already but still here I am. This story broke my heart. Never thought that her past would include such an evil person - Danny. Anyway, the next chapters are so sensual. One of them is very brutal - the one when Danny haves sex with Kelly even after he shot her. I want to tear out all his body parts one by one. He doesn't deserve to die quickly. What should happen to him is that all his limbs should be removed, eyes and tongue plucked out, his penis crushed and his mind intact. Okay that is so mean but so that he could have all the time in the world to think of the evil he has caused. Please update.
| zagato chapter 13 . 11/6/2003
Wonderful chapter! As they all say, this is war. The traps and alarms are a nice touch. I hope they get Danny and kill him slowly. Oh my! I never thought she still thinks she killed her mother. Lila's past is just so tragic - I could almost sympathize with her. This is really, really great. Please update.
| zagato chapter 12 . 11/6/2003
Oh my! That is so scary. Lila's worst fears have come true. Oh no! Got to read more.
| zagato chapter 9 . 11/6/2003
Hmm, so it must be Cole or Nikolas then. I like the last sentence. "I don't think you are soft at al" That was so funny. Have to read more.
| zagato chapter 5 . 11/6/2003
Great twist! I love this chapter. The plot and the blood thickens. I think the killer would either be Cole, Landon or Nikolas. Anyway, the way you build up this mystery is simply amazing. Got to read more.
| zagato chapter 4 . 11/6/2003
Great story! I see a big feud coming up. Nikolas and Cole fighting it out for Lila Pierce. Ha! Got to read more.