Reviews for BloodStreaked |
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![]() ![]() good lord, woman. One hair standing chapter after another. |
![]() ![]() oh the chap was nice! very scary nightmare, freaky little boy..loved when she woke up in coles arms, he is just so cute, love the comebacks, and teh part where cole is talking about how his mother owuld like her and yes to put it lightly its not a best place to leave so plz update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() damn...i hope Danny rots in hell. I love animals more than I love people, and danny definitely deserves to die. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes, I love reviewing. I love it almost as much as reading stories. But when stories are a damned good as this I tend to completely forget about stopping to review O_o This story is great. I've never read anything like it before...it's great because you have such talent and because Its new to me. And I read a lot. Blah I apologize for not reviewing for every chapter like most people would. I know that reviews are great to get, even if I'm a bit of a bad writer. Anyways I'll be looking forward to reading the next chapters. I hope you hurry! -Dai G out |
![]() ![]() Well, I didn't think the mistakes were bad at all, or maybe I just didn't care because you're such a great writer. Take your pick! Go Lila and Cole, go ahead and seal the deal! Let's just hope they don't get interrupted. I guess we all know neither of them would take that too lightly. Great update, even if it was slightly shorter and that Danny kid, terrible! He was just a little monster, poor Lila. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! I love your nightmare. That Danny(right?) is such a mean little boy. I don't know where you can come up with these things. They're, yeah I'm gonna say it, billiant. LoL Do you hate that word yet? Anyway, I just came on quickly to read your chapter. Now i must go and attempt the reading of A Prayer For Owen Meany. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a great chapter! i can't wait for more, not that i'm trying too push you since you just got this one up. |
![]() ![]() That little boy freaked me out...I was literally scared! I probably would have done what Lila did too! Anyway, it was a great chapter, especially finding out more about Lila's past! |
![]() ![]() I don't believe I've reviewed yet. It's really good, like everything you're written. Very intense. Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWESOME :) very very very insightful hahahaha it was cool knowing why she's like that. lol. why do i always use 'awesome'? lmao. the both of them are so sweet together haha. yAY update soon! muah love it! |
![]() ![]() _! Great chappie. Thanks for the update :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() the chapter is sad. at least she has a good reason for being emotionally fucked. its friday! your suppose to update! please |
![]() ![]() GREAT UPDATE! and stp saying if u wnat to read it or u probably don't wana read it...cuz I DO WANT TO READ NO IFs. anyways, u weirdo in the head, a very scary killer, yes yes my vocab sucks all i can say is scary, also dylan aw he is so cute, i hope he and anita get together. also i luv dylan hitting colan with a pillow funny also the whole nuke thing, lol could be true. also the nightmare u know its a bad place to end i so want to choke u right now but i will wait for ur story to finish. oh oh last thing "i will not have sex" so funny! so now go write or sleep cause u are horribly tired! |
![]() ![]() Hi I was first recomended this story from my sister, who doesn't like to review. This stroy is really good and we would like you to please contine updating. BloodStreaked is intresting and it was very enjoyable to read. Keep Updating! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh, that's so sad, poor Lila...I believe I hate her father. |