Reviews for BloodStreaked
someone chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
Hey you posted this story! Where the hell have I been? Well...I'm definately of to read your next...1, 2,...three chapters! This story rocks so far! Love the way you depicted Lila. I don't like Landon. He seems evil. This may be a dumb question... but how exactly do you pronounce her name? Is it Lye-la. or Lee-lah.'s official. I'm an idiot.
mo chapter 4 . 8/18/2003
first of all the story about cole and dylan trying to jump from the window, :) very funny, i like dylan and nial they make good friends, and realistic ones too i go to my friends house for free meals all the time second , the character u made on anne, hmm very like her, i like the whole seeking absolution and her saying no thing :)Also the best friend haunting anne, hmm so like u!. oh also the part about cole smiling at her while everybody is staring at him as if he is gone crazy so swet!anyways great update write more soon i mean it sweetie!
Lisa0211 chapter 4 . 8/18/2003
Hehe...ok. That was great...the attemps on her life by that psycho Anne lady. Great. I was kinda cracking up...I don't know why. But, I bet Cole will be pissed as anything if he finds out that Lila intended to kill him the first time they slept together. Hahaha. I hope she fallss...hard! hehe first. Then he can. hehe. ~Lisa~
FlyingPhish chapter 4 . 8/17/2003
oh Lila, but I doo see NIkolas's vantage point on this. this is all getting very screwed.
pressandclick chapter 4 . 8/17/2003
Great chapter! I'm really interested in knowing what happened to Lila that has made her so unfeeling...will you be explaining all of that later on? Oh well, good chapter...update soon please!
VenatrixNoctis chapter 4 . 8/17/2003
That was hilarious! LOL Dylan, Nial and Cole are so adorable! And the whole psycho thing, I love it and you knew I would. LoL it was what I had going for you in my assassin story, but you do it so much better! *sigh* it's ok, cuz I enjoy your stories. )
Harsh chapter 4 . 8/17/2003
i feel like a dumbass for not knowing that, but like i said i was tired!

Cole sounds so yummy... he keeps on distracting me!

this lila chic is more complex than i ever thought she could be... it's like whoa, you know? no you don't know, i'm just rambling... or you might know... hehe

i'm sleep deprived, but i'll try to update tonight for you, you should get it at about 12pm eastern time, that's in like 15 min.

have fun writing the next chapter!
wacka dkid chapter 3 . 8/17/2003
no more incest. yay. incest wouldnt actually apply would it? oh well, the chapters are awesome so...update!
wacka dkid chapter 2 . 8/17/2003
AH! incest. er, yeah, you put sierra instead of lila once. i read that and didn't process it very fast..
VenatrixNoctis chapter 3 . 8/16/2003
Incredible! Absolutely incredible! LoL I tried to think of a brilliant review but I'm just plain speechless. Your story is *hot*...but then again, write about Cole reading the newpaper and I'd still think it was hot. That shows you just how much I love your characters and I can't wait for you to get the the parts that you told me about! Hurry up and write! I know, it took me a while to actually get to reading your chapter, but it took me three days to reformat my computer and I forgot to save the approx. 300 websites I had stored! LoL oh well, your chapter cheered me up so it's okay. )
Harsh chapter 3 . 8/15/2003
I love it! so she thinks he's dead, but he's not? i dunno, i'm sure you'll clear it up, or i'll figure it out, cause i'm tired and can't think, it'll come to me later!

your right this one is way faster than your other stories! but it suits teh characters... i dunno what i'm talking about... nothings coming out right!

i'm gonna go to sleep now...

have fun writing the next chapter, and i wish you power(figuratively and literally!)
pressandclick chapter 3 . 8/15/2003
Great chapter...lucky Landon called at the last minute! I suppose I'll have to be patient and wait but I don't think I can - update asap please!
Lisa0211 chapter 3 . 8/15/2003
Nope to both of those last questions. This was a very good chapter. I didn't think there was a good reason for his murder except for the fact that he was a playboy and I was right. I actually like Cole despite that fact. I mean, he is a guy after all. I want a guy who kisses like that...hell, I want to be ABLE to kiss like that. Hehe. I wonder if practice all I have to do is go find a hot guy...ok, anyways, great chapter, great story. Can't wait for the one on Elizabeth Jade. ~Lisa~
mo chapter 3 . 8/15/2003
lollololol first of all, he falling asleep at the exact moment they were going to do it. too funny. Also poor landon just trying to makehis daughter happy really my parents don't care. oh oh nikolas fatherly type telling his not to tell mommy, lol poor guy from assasin to this:) very funny update!
mo chapter 2 . 8/15/2003
first of all i luved the banter between nikolas and lila, it was funny! oh also hmm coles description, makes me luv him, sad sad he is not real! lovely update!
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