Reviews for BloodStreaked
Tempest116 chapter 19 . 3/26/2007
You know, I wouldn't have minded if Lila had died in the end. I think it just seemed fitting that when she's finally found sound something to live for she dies in the end. It would have been sad but sometimes people don't realize what they've lost or could lose until the end when their at risk of losing it.

Anyway, great story I had fun reading it. _
Veritaz chapter 9 . 2/19/2007
omg, that scene with cole and lila is the singlemost intense thing i've ever read! i love this story, it has absolutely everything in it - action, romance, lust...fab! can't wait to keep reading xx
abc123 chewy chapter 20 . 2/8/2007
you are, i must say, by far the best author EVER! i liked all four of you 'series' stories...

Linda chapter 8 . 1/24/2007
flojo22811 chapter 1 . 12/3/2006
so my favourite in this series!
D chapter 19 . 10/12/2006
Yo! Haha, that dunno how to say it! Gawd! It was Fantastic! It was well written and I found VERY few typos-great achievement! Hehe, just have a few minor suggestions that you can ignore and well one that you most certainly should not, in my opinion[only 1]. Ok, let's start with the one you can ignore, hehe, maybe this is just me or whatnot, but, i found it too formal haha! Don't get offended, this is constructive criticism! It's just that it was so, ionno how to explain, just makes use of more "I've, We're, They're, We'll..." Get my drift? Haha! Anyway, if that is your style, your choice! ok, the other one,you forgot about your other characters, to put it plainly. You forgot to tell us what happened to Anita, Dylan, Nikoas, etc. But you did end your story WONDERFULLY! But I think the readers, ok well maybe only I, will appreciate it more if you at least outlined what happened to them. Unless you plan to continue this story, which I know not. So anyway, Great job! Even more than that! Hope you the best of luck...!
toxic-noodle725 chapter 1 . 8/28/2006
though it was confusing in some points. i still like it. overall it was a great story.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/22/2006
Anne Gresham sat down in her chair and crossed her hands. She started the meeting like she always did. “Forgive me, Sister, for I have sinned.”

Lila repeated the line she knew she would have to in order for Anne Gresham to talk. “Are you seeking absolution, child?”

Anne Gresham grinned wickedly. “No.”

okay, I loved those few lines,lolXDXD
Summer's Light chapter 19 . 5/25/2006
AHH i was so confusled reading this story, i prined it out and my printer screwed up so i had to print it out over again, then it turns out that i was missing some paragraphs! Ur...then i just found out b/c im stupid that this was one of the last/ or last of a series i feel so stupid! But i re read it with the missing parts! Now I love it! Absolutly! Great job! I will be looking forward to reading the other 1st 2 now, then your current story!I started reading your short ones awhile ago, and thats what made me decide that sence your short ones are just jaw dropping awesom, i should start reading your long ones! Darn i really did want to read more of Vampires Kiss that was wow! :)! Well im glad i started reading your long ones! But as i read from your short story author notes and some of these, you don't update frequently, i only hope that i don;t run out of things of yours to read before your next update!Kudos!Anastasia
Mimerz chapter 18 . 5/22/2006
no! why did it have to be Nial! He was one of my favs! wow...this sux..o well great story tho...i love the suspense. all your stories are great.
emerald chapter 19 . 3/10/2006
i really really enjoyed reading this story and i absolutely love the thrilling fast pace! you are so good! you need to get this publish seriously - the drama, the romance and everything- wow - it's packed with fun! but the nial part was a big surprise...i don't understand, why did he become friends with cole before it was necessary? he couldn't have possibly have known lila would fall for Cole and all that :S and also the jokes, i don't just seemed a bit absurd, please explain...
Raomina chapter 19 . 1/14/2006
This is a wonderful romance tale weaved with action, suspense and great characters. Lila is intelligent, manipulative, beautiful, strong; everything you can ask for in a heroine. The pace of the plot was just right, the events of the plot were tied neatly together, though, since this was Lila's and Cole's story, the fate of the other characters was not presented. I love how this chapter was set up, how you described how she felt when she thought that those she cared about had not visited her, and how she thought about those events that had occurred to her. I like how you'd her escape, how she was The Raven and that she covered her tracks so completely; that sounded so much more of the assassin that I have come to like. It was a pity that you didn't include Raven-In-Action, save the one with Cole, since he wasn't even an assassin. Anyway, this is a cleverly thought of plot, with her nightmares haunting her and how she was made to think that she was inhuman. I think Danny was the most interesting character. He must be either downright cruel or he had a wire loose in his head. *cough* Psycopath *cough* Oh well, I will certainly read your other stories when I have the time and great job overall!
DarkestSecrets chapter 20 . 1/13/2006
this is such a good story! i'm spose to be doin my chemistry assignment but when i came across this story i couldn't stop reading! lolz the ending of chapter 17 was o romantic and heart quenching, for a moment i thought lila died, that would have been so sad...god cole and lila are so good together! great story, love the plot, love the characters, love the ending, love everything! okay i'm gonna start on my science assignment now...can't wait to read tears of blood!:D
Under the Stars chapter 20 . 12/27/2005
delta alpha mike november is all i can say. fucking fantastic. and i don't usually swear. but shit, was this amazing. i love it. i regret not having read the other stories from the blood saga. but i will definitely be reading them some time very soon. very very very soon. wonderful plot and twists and characters and i just love this whole story. fucking alpha mike alpha zulu igloo november golf. you have got something great going with this blood saga
Abigail Radle chapter 2 . 12/9/2005
I noticed that about 3/4 of the way through this chapter, Lila's name is replaced with "Sierra" ... I assumed it to be an error, so I thought I would mention it.
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