Reviews for BloodStreaked |
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![]() ![]() ![]() *stares* that's why he was going to die? what the hell kind of a spoiled bitch ass daughter does the guy have? well, at least she didn't kill him. funny. i don't have a problem reading slash smut, but i feel a little uncomfortable reading regular smut parts. well, whatever. nothing stops me from reading what i want. very great story you have so far. it's very interesting. (for lack of a better word) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. He must be good if he could sneak up on her. She's an assassin and they're supposed to have honed super skills or something of the like. Very interesting. Hey, does he know she's after him? I mean, my gut instinct (which almost gets me killed sometimes because it's usually wrong) is telling me he does. Well, be seeing you next chapter! (hm... first review with capital letters, periods, and commas... i'm getting less lazy. P) |
![]() ![]() ![]() the fuck? ha ha ha... he has to die handcuffed to a bed... yeesh... interesting so far. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOAH! THIS STORY WAS AWESOME! I LOVED IT SOO MUCH! THERE WAS SO MUCH ACTION AND ROMANCE AND SUSPENCE! WOAH! I LOVED THIS STORY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. just... wow. that was an awesome story. totally. the plot was very deep. not obvious like other stories. you are an awesome writer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love it great story |
![]() ![]() o cole's gonna hate her!i love the way this story is moving..it's so exciting! it reminds me of a television show called Alias b/c it has that mysterious/thriller aura...where you're just like "i wanna know what happens next!" |
![]() ![]() ohh! this story is getting really good...for some reason it reminds me of ABS's Alias, which i adore _ |
![]() ![]() this is one of my favorite stories! You ARE going to publish this one, aren't you? please? |
![]() ![]() wow!as in wow! the best story here in fictionpress. Your a very talented author.. my hats off you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG this was a great, great, fantastic story! I really enjoyed reading it asdofni! Yes. *is calm now* Thank you for writing a quality story. Bay |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know I just reviewed about half a second ago, but I thought that you deserve more reviews. hehe, anyway.. I just finished reading the story and I LOVED it. I don't actually review too often, (I think this is my 20th review?), so whenever I do review.. it means that I really enjoyed/am enjoying the story.I love all your characters and how they each have their own personalities, Dylan, Anita, Lila, Cole... I found Anita's character amusing. ) Keep up the great work and I can't wait to read more of your stories! ~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this chapter, I think you're a talented writer and develop your characters very well, so congrats! I especially like how Lila/Cole interact with each other. ) ~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've read most of this series and I love your writing. The stories are interesting and suspenseful and flow well. I was just wondering ... how can the guy be dead for eight years and have a mistress who is pregnant? What am I missing? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've read all your fics and they're reaLLy gReaT! Noticed a few typos but heY, everyone makes mistakes _ The twists you put into the Blood Saga so far are grEat. I'm sso glad all ends well [I'm a sucker for happy endings] I don't check much so I hope you can email me [] when you've finished exams and start writing again? Good luck etc |