|Reviews for In love|
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 4/14/2005
Love is that feeling,
Makes you kind when all would hate,
Reprobate of sorts.
—¿Who can say what's right?
When life makes it all seem wrong,—
Love makes it all right.
—¿Is there just one way,
For love to express itself?
¿Or, a myriad?
—¿Why doesn't it fade?
All inks wear away with time,
Yet your love remains.
—Snagged & ripped love's cloth,
Yet I cannot entertain,—
Anything but quilts.
—That rose I gave Thee,
Thou preserved,—intact & straight,
Though brittle it stays.
¿How to understand their meaning,—
If it's not love's talk?
p.s. Hope you're well. Spring in Boston and New Haven is heavenly. ¿Where are the snows of Yesteryear? ;-)
| angel of sorrow n darkness chapter 1 . 9/26/2004
wow that was good short and sweet very good work
| estrela chapter 1 . 10/30/2003
i can so relate to that, as well as, most likely, the majority of the populations in middle and high school around the world... at least. Loved the rhyming!
| Obsessed Dreamer chapter 1 . 10/1/2003
I loved how you ended the poem! Its soo cool.
| SicksisterSam chapter 1 . 8/20/2003
very cool very true for a lot of people I bet. Wicked Brillant keep writing! Laters!
PS Thanks for the reviews
| lovely-death chapter 1 . 8/19/2003
This poem is so cute but sad! I think it's awesome. I like how you rhymed every third line. It made me go "Aw"
| SweetGrape chapter 1 . 8/19/2003
Basic and truthful telling of how you can love someone even when they hurt you- but no one else can understand it.
Not insightful or brilliant, but very soft and easy to relate to.
| kep chapter 1 . 8/16/2003
That's sweet and is a point I'm sure most people can empathise with. Your expression is simple but nicely done, it really gets across the idea and emotions of the poem.
| Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 8/14/2003
Very sweet poem. :) I know how u feel.