Reviews for Dance of the Red Shadows
warnthepenguins chapter 1 . 9/29/2003
Pretty good stuff. The only problem I see is a tendency to misuse words-for example, you said "strutted" when you meant "strode," and "mingled" when you meant "lingered."

Not done yet!
Celeste Se'oir chapter 3 . 9/14/2003
Neat,battles, gotta love 'em. Your so good, I like your style. Too bad mine sucks. Keep writing!
Celeste Se'oir chapter 2 . 9/14/2003
I'm your only reviewer,sniff, that's so sad your really good. Well then I'll just have to keep reveiwing then huh?
Celeste Se'oir chapter 1 . 8/14/2003
Quite interesting, nice graphic details

maybe I could learn something from you