Reviews for Of Ends To Come
Child of Dusk chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
This reminds of a song... Well, band, really. I love the imagery, again, but you seem to use the word death a lot...
Ian Shweltser chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
wow that was good. not as good as your other stuff but still really good.
Countess Cole chapter 1 . 8/22/2003
This is a gorgeous piece of writing, vivid and dramatic. I enjoyed reading every line. My favorite part is this:

"so we cope and cope

so we hope and hope

but the ending is already there

another broken soul enters the lair"
Enter The Coil chapter 1 . 8/20/2003
what an amazing song! i absolutely love it! i read it then re-read it hehe. My favorite part was: "dead, so dead everything rots in my head."

anyway, absolutely brilliant,

~shauna.

p.s.-thanks for reviewing some of my stuff _ **muah!**
JoyfullyStruggling chapter 1 . 8/19/2003
woah, i liked that. it was cool
not sure yet chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
very emotional, another very well written poem except i think it needs some more puncuation, but otherwise, WOW, i love this, every stanza of it, incredible job
S. R. Devaste chapter 1 . 8/14/2003
Nice work I like the line

Whispered in a starry night

Under Shining dead starlight

Good Job-

If it isn't too much trouble could you please reveiw my work.