|Reviews for Of Ends To Come|
| Child of Dusk chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
This reminds of a song... Well, band, really. I love the imagery, again, but you seem to use the word death a lot...
| Ian Shweltser chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
wow that was good. not as good as your other stuff but still really good.
| Countess Cole chapter 1 . 8/22/2003
This is a gorgeous piece of writing, vivid and dramatic. I enjoyed reading every line. My favorite part is this:
"so we cope and cope
so we hope and hope
but the ending is already there
another broken soul enters the lair"
| Enter The Coil chapter 1 . 8/20/2003
what an amazing song! i absolutely love it! i read it then re-read it hehe. My favorite part was: "dead, so dead everything rots in my head."
anyway, absolutely brilliant,
p.s.-thanks for reviewing some of my stuff _ **muah!**
| JoyfullyStruggling chapter 1 . 8/19/2003
woah, i liked that. it was cool
| not sure yet chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
very emotional, another very well written poem except i think it needs some more puncuation, but otherwise, WOW, i love this, every stanza of it, incredible job
| S. R. Devaste chapter 1 . 8/14/2003
Nice work I like the line
Whispered in a starry night
Under Shining dead starlight
If it isn't too much trouble could you please reveiw my work.