good although you gotta wonder if she didnt cut herself cause of her appearence why would she let everyone see her all of a sudden?i guess it happened a little to fast especially if she made the decision up all on her own either way i still liked it lol

you are a very talented writer and I like this alot. Looks could be deceptive.

nicely done. i hope though that this story isn't drawn from personal experience! i did see one little mistake, you used the word conflict, instead of inflict, in the 3rd to last paragraph.