Reviews for Picture Perfect chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
good although you gotta wonder if she didnt cut herself cause of her appearence why would she let everyone see her all of a sudden?i guess it happened a little to fast especially if she made the decision up all on her own either way i still liked it lol
lostrunner chapter 1 . 1/26/2004
you are a very talented writer and I like this alot. Looks could be deceptive.
Disturbances within chapter 1 . 8/14/2003
nicely done. i hope though that this story isn't drawn from personal experience! i did see one little mistake, you used the word conflict, instead of inflict, in the 3rd to last paragraph.