I like this, its pretty good, just make the chapters a bit longer.

wow your fic is so...evil!

I don't relly know wat to say...uh...update son!

hes a big meanie.

awesome! i'd write more but i have no time! update please! james is creepy...

Thanks for the great review of my little dance story, I really appreciate it. About the paragraphs, I write them all tabbed but when it comes through to the site some of them end up all bunched up for some reason. If you know why, let me know and I'll fix it 'cause I know how annoying it is. I really liked the begginning of this story, keep up the great work!

Eck... he reminds me of my... friends boyfriend. Only they're worse. They go to the toilet together, shower together, live together, it's scary. I don't know how she can stand it...

Anyway, nice start. It's actually vey realistic, I'd love to see more.

Hmm.. interesting start. I'm into these type of stories. A couple of spelling mistakes. And you hoped it wasn't a short chapter eh? Lol. Yeah it was, update soon. I like you're story! Bye.

DJ