Reviews for Perfections Murder
D chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
All dolls eventaully fade, or break.D.
JoyfullyStruggling chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
I understand a lot of this, I get a lot of the feeling.
IHavePizza chapter 1 . 9/10/2004
I like the aspect you took on the views of war. It's different. I also like the descriptions in this poem- very unique.
ChibiYume chapter 1 . 8/16/2003
I've always found poetry hard to give suggestions for, because it's from the heart and is meant to be read deeper into the meaning behind the words, a sort of artistic abstraction of words, so I don't think this poem needs any changes at all! To me, this poem speaks of stopping the bloodshed of war, that it's not the answer, and to stop encouraging it. That's what it means to me anyway, and I like it, and that's my opinion too. War is for little boys that can't get their way. :p
Ryeran chapter 1 . 8/15/2003
That's very interesting.

I have to wonder..what does "Don't lead them to kill again" mean? What does it refer to?

Rye