Reviews for Empty
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 11/28/2004
Incomprehensible this feeling. ┬┐Aren't 6 senses enough? m
mmoonsshiner chapter 1 . 9/11/2003
... intresting ..

ittybittytreefrog chapter 1 . 9/10/2003
Wow. This is powerful, especially considering it's length.

I've felt empty before. I do sometimes, still. You just have to snap out of it, I suppose. Easier said than done, I suppose.
cosmo-queen chapter 1 . 8/17/2003
Very good poem. The manner in which you wrote this poem was very effective. Keep writing :)

Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 8/14/2003
Excellent work. Simple yet powerful.

~Heart of the Sword
JaphyRider chapter 1 . 8/14/2003
Excellent. Excellente. Wonderful.

I like it. The fact that it's so true, as you say, improves the poem. Your emotion is in this piece and around it. You made me believe you. Good job. And I am guessing the meaning, but leaving it unsaid.

One piece of criticism. . .Except isn't a very good poetry word, in my humble opinion. I believe "only" would work well there, or "yet". But that's just me:)

All around, a great piece of work, and the fact that you're talking about something embarrasses you increases the goodness. Keep it up.