zaire and roux are the same person?

love this story please update

I'm actually rooting for Roux! I know he's sadistic and cruel but it seems to me that he's falling in love with Lianne. And she's exactly what he needs to make him change his ways.

I'm not sure how Lianna's feeling. She had sex with Roux first and i like to think she's in love with his good side. Whereas i think Zaire doesn't really love Lianna but is mourning for Cheetsah and sees her in Lianna.

Update soon!

Come on! Update! My sanity of not knowing what's going to happen next is slowly deteriorating by each passing moment! New chapter! New Chapter! Oh I beg You!

I really enjoyed every chapter of this story so far. I've noticed a few mistakes in sentence structure, but other than that, this has been a pretty amazing read. I congradulate you on this, it's not easy for me to find something and actually enjoy it to the fullest like I have with your story. This sort of reminds me of Reyanna Vance's "Vampires Don't Exist". Your character 'Roux' seems a lot like Reyanna's 'Aimeric'. Like her, I think if you finish and have it completely reviewed you could have this published. If you haven't read "Vampires Don't Exist", I highly recomend it. Here is a link for her book review. It may or may not work. . ?id14738

Good luck with future stories! And, I'm looking forward for the rest of these chapters. :)

This is a very good story, I've been reading it for weeks whenever I get the time, which isn't often, and I finally caught up! This is a great story and I'm trying to figure out whats going to happen next; I love the Cresten and Sonora part of the story. I thought it was so sweet!

Now Roux and Zaire and Lianna on the otherhand I'm confused with. Roux has proved to be a self-absorbed, cruel, sadistic, sexist pig and I couldn't stand him through most of the story, and still have problems tolerating him now...but something seems to be happening with him - He's falling in love with Lianna, which makes me wonder...Any road, hes going to be so pissed if and when Lianna gets away...I can't wait for that part! Update soon!

I read all thirty-two chapters in a row. They were all fantastic. Definitely going on my favourites list! It's the best story I've read for a long time, on here or anywhere else. Well done.

Wow, I just finished your whole story in like a day, and I really really love it! I cant wait untill the next chapter! Plus you are doing a great job with all the details like what kind of horses sonora and cresten were riding. I have a grey arab mare just like sonora's and you did a great job of describing it. Nothing makes me more annoyed then when people try to talk about horses and end up describing something from a children's cartoon! But you did wonderfully! Please update soon!

Why are you not continuing the story! I am in love with it and I want to know the end, what happens next? Please? Pretty, pretty please? Well love the story.

~Boe

hm it said I had already submitted a review on the last chapter which I dont remmber doing... Anyways I had started reading your story long ago and since then had forgotten where I had saved the link. But I was very very happy the other day when I came across it once more. _ So here I am. I don't have time to read these two chapter that I havent read and I do hope that you wont mind that I print them out so I can read them later! _ Alright well toodles I look forward to reading more!

I really hope that you update this story. i know it's been like, wut, a year since u updated? But this story is really far along and i would love to read teh end of it.

-blink blink- no more? i read this back in.. december i believe.. O_O must have more.. more.. more..

Just picked up the story - LOVED it, couldn't put it down. Totally addictive. Are you still writing this? If so, UPDATE! What happens?

Oh god, I am a sick and twisted reviewer. I am soo sorry that I didnt review for ALL of the chapters, because they are ALL magnificent and worthy of praise (besides a few grammical errors, but no big deal) I have read your story from start to... relative finish at least three times now and I'm still in awe. I am GREATLY pleased with your work and I urge you to continue. Roux has been sick and twisted, yet his split personality is heart wrenching and you can't help but love the big guy. Zaire is lovely, poor lad for losing Cheetsah to such a... bastard (I LOVE YOU ROUX, SORRY!). I almost screamed my head off when you added that they (Zaire and Roux) were not only brothers, but twins! I couldn't believe your genius, it's still hard to grasp. Envina is gross and evil, but hey. Every good story has a good evil character out to ruin everyone else's live for their own gain,it works. I just wish she wasn't so stomach churning. *shudder* Now my review is OBSCENELY long and I am going to wrap it up. I cannot wait until you bring out the rest of the story, I am waiting anxiously. Keep in mind, when you are writing it's good to go until you have no words left, but then you have to go back and look over what you've written. Your grammar is teetering on the fine edge between a trademark and a disaster waiting to happen. Otherwise, I am in love with this story. Keep up the good work! All the best, Lola SuePS: Brilliance is in the eye of the beholder, and you are BRILLIANT

AAH! that was utterly amazing. i hope we see more of the "good guy" roux. I like him a lot. I dont like Mr. "If you dont do what i say im going to fuck your brains out. WOOT!