AIIEE! Poor Cresten! Poor Lianna! Envina and Roux deserve each other. I think Cresten should rescue Lianna and the two of them could lock Envina and Roux in the dungeon together. I figure, Roux's gonna get horny and after a long time down there - Envina's going to look mighty good!

That sucks for Cresten. What's going to happen next?

:P You are now in my favorite stories list! I have to see your other work later to have you in my favorite authors list.. but in due time.. UPDATE!

Did I tell you already how much I love Roux? *stretches out arms far and wide* This Much. Can I have him after your finished? Pretty please with sugar on top and icecream in the middle. please? I was wondering something else to do you by any chance have an account on ? If so do you like wrestling? If so I have three of 'em up on there under Love N' Lost yeah I know plugging ain't good. But oh well.

omgosh! You cannot leave with a cliffhanger like that? LOL! UPDATE PLEASE I AM DYING!

Awe this chapter was good. I can't wait for more update soon!

that was a quick resolution. poor lianna. i feel really sorry for her. if this is the end, it seems like a cliffhanger. wow! i wonder if roux would eventually love lianna. too bad for all of them. thank you for writing!

i love this story and i'm finding myself growing attached to Roux as i'm sure is ur intentions... but i'm afraid of the "tragedy" part of your story. i guess he'll get what's coming to him...
oh, and awesome steamy scenes looking forward to more.

in this chapter, you seemed to be moving from one scene or event to another very quickly, and it got confusing at times.

you're style of writing is very nice and flows smoothly. but i think it would be a more enjoyable read if you maybe made the paragraphs smaller and separated the dialogue into their own paragraphs. otherwise, i enjoyed it very much!

lol funny, update soon

Oh my god poor Roux have him kill that ugly scaly thing! I feel so sorry for him. I like the last paragraph
"Oh God" he thought again, his erection instantly dropping like a stone, she looked no better from his closing eyes and opening them again. How was he ever going to be able to consummate this marriage?
That cracked me up. Poor Poor Poor Roux!

Oh...Oh...I loved it. I absolutely loved the fact that Roux was so repulsed. Hehehe. He finally gets what he deserves...Go Envina...kick but. Anyhow, you must update soon. I am sad that there was no Lianna in this chapter...great job though...please update very very very soon! _

wow, this chapter (and the last 1 too, btw) was really awesome! i sense a revolt coming hehehe. and this chap was cool w/ the icky, whiny princess. that is a good question, how will he consummate this marriage? well, great job, update again soon!

HAHAHA!
Well that's just desserts for Roux! I hope he has to spawn an "her" uppon her and that she's so nearly infertile that he's gotta do her every night for months. Hee hee hee. Sucks to be you Roux!