Reviews for Not Even If You were the Last man on Earth |
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![]() ![]() Just a thought: You rock my ever invisible multi-colored socks. honestly, true i wish your chapters were, oh i dont know, a LOT longer... :) but i really love your plot and your execution of this story. Kudos! |
![]() ![]() I absolutely love your story so far, im just disappointed that theyre so short! oh well, theyre still extremely enjoyable. Kudos! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I wish you'd update, soon. You've left us hanging out on a limb. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OKay I have read your intire story atleast three times. I can not post on the last chapter so I'm posting here: UPDATE SOON OR ELSE! but please pretty please update soon. The suspense is killing me! -BOE |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting story... |
![]() ![]() Oh... why couldn't it be finished? I wanna know if they were able to escape... |
![]() ![]() keep wrighting i love it your doing great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beh. I read this, and am often checking for updates, but it's been so long... |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok its getting much better now that the story doesnt revolve around sex and has more of a plot. hahaha envinas so funny. she cracks me up. shes so weird. wouldnt cresten have noticed she's majorly fat veil or no veil? how weird... |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmm. I like this story, I really do. I only have one bit of criticism for this chapter. Roux changed way too fast. He went from coldly calling her "it" to abruptly caring about her. He should have gone through much more of a battle with his inner demons before he thought charitably. You mention that there's two sides to him, two Roux's. But I haven't seen that other, kinder side to him before this (or maybe I missed something?). I liked Roux from the previous chapters: cruel, vain, and very un-heroic. But this chapter just didn't fit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your pretty good, please update cause i would love to know the ending |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's a good story with a living story-line. Very good language and grammar, only a few blunders. Anyways... I hope you continue soon because if you're not aware that was sort of a cliff-hanger and it's very annoying for people to read a 31 chapter story, then realise that it's not finished and that the author stopped writing. I know everything about writer's blocks, but that's something you can allow yourself to have while you're an amateur author who has no one reading your stories. Writing on is a lot more like real life and dead-lines. If it takes too long for you to update or you don't do it consistently, you WILL loose your readers no matter how great the story is. And that isn't good, because this story deserves to be read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HEY! I haven't reviewed for you at all, but I have been reading your story. I must say, props for you! It rocks, this story. I can't wait for more. *glances repeatedly at clock* |
![]() ![]() ![]() hm good use of words. |