OMG...I love this story and I love Roux damn he's my favorite. though the last chapter and what he did to that little girl was so God Damn Wrong oh well update soon plz and I'll love you forever

Wow. Wow. Wow. Okay that was really really devastating and yet a great piece of work even though it was really bad and sad. Hey, that is what writing is all about, expressing things from different angles. So sorry that I didn't review this earlier but my compy was down and out with a virus but now it is back up so yea...update soon. Bye 4 now ! _ ~_

Falls over backwards...*inhales* OHMYGAWD... oh well, but whats gonna happen, STUPID ROUX, HE IS SUPPOSED TO BE SEMI-NICE...GAH *resists the urge to shoot him in the face, the f*cker* oh well, he's hot, BUT POOR LIANNA! she didn't do anything *tear* save her! make roux fall in love with her and be nice to her... SOMETHING! hehe, UPDATE!

Great chapter! Poor Lianna and Cheetsah. Cruel and sex-starved Roux - he is so mean. Anyway, I have read another story here that reminds me of this - Dies Irae by Laelia. Like in this story, the man is blonde and the woman has black hair. It still has three chapters but Dazius, the man in the story, has already done it with Aemilia. Like what I reviewed in that story, with Lianna unconscious, this also makes me imagine the Sleeping Beauty Series by Anne Rice and the fairy tale Sun, Moon, and Talia by Giambattista Basile. Please update.

Uh, I hate cliffhangers! Why did you stop here? Poor girl? What is going to happen next? Do update

its good, really good

hey cool story

Zanna Avons

E. Really sad. Anyhow, I loved it. It puts a whole new meaning to the word story. Keep writing. Damn cliffe's ... lol ... ish okay... i do it to. Keep writing and please make the next chapter longer. _ ~_

*Trys very hard not to get all trigger happy with a shot gun and accidentally kill Roux* Gr, STUPID MALES! annyways, you seriously cannot let poor bratty Lianna get raped! Its not fair! Someone needs to barge in the room and scream that stupid Roux's castle is under attack or something...*Sniff* Poor Lianna... Oh well, UPDATE, PLEASE!

Great chapter! Short but it sure is exciting. Roux's penis seems awfully big. The girth of a small wrist and the length of a dagger? Must be gigantic. That is definitely a cliffhanger. Please update.

O, suspense! Good job. And if people get offended, they shouldn't as it is rated R and everything, they don't have to read it if they don't want to. Yeah...and vaque is bad, you've already done so good so far, and I want it to continue, I can't wait for more!

Keep it up! I love it!

Uh, finally I took the time to review your story which I must say I have been reading since day one. My guess is that if you make the rape more detailed it would give a better impression - as a reality I mean. After all, It is rated R. Anyway, I love it so you'd better update it soon!

Good story so far! Please update it

PLEASE don't let him rape her! but yay for update

Update soon. How could you let that happen to her . ? A well I think it makes the story interesting. Well update soon. Bye for now *_* ~_