Reviews for Not Even If You were the Last man on Earth |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wow! cool chapter |
![]() ![]() great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, so good! Well done w. grammar! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, Roux's had quite a character change...one minute he's the ruthless conqueror, claiming some female trophies...the next, Lianna's that /one girl/ who manages to crack his heart of ice. Suddenly-he /cares/. I mean come on, the guy grabbed her with the intention of raping her, and now he's letting her defy him and worrying that he might have hurt her? Hyeah. Right. She's not superwoman. She sounds like a bit of a bitch actually, serve her right if he breaks her or whatever. *can't believe she just said that...runs away* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why is it that so many of the female characters in ficdom are stunningly beautiful? I mean seriously. In real life, I've never seen anyone with eyes like Lianna's; and I've definitely *never* seen anyone with "full red lips," although that one pops up in nearly every story. Was she wearing lipstick? No? Than her lips, at best, would be pink. ish. Normal people don't always look gorgeous! Especially not in the bathtub. Gah. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! Great story you've written so far. You got me hooked! I can't wait for the next update! I put you on my favorite stories list, and my author alert list, so i can know when you've updated. I hope to be reading more great chapters! Cheers! Viv |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, you have a great start to the story. And I like the confusion that Roux is feeling about Lianna. Always proves to be interesting. Can't wait for the next update! Good job! :o) |
![]() ![]() ![]() *Grins* I WANT MORE |
![]() ![]() WOA! poor gal...Is she going to end up sick? It kinda seems that way to me, but then..I'm jus the reader. :) lol Well, I like this so far...:) Its looking really nice! I hope you continue real soon! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool, please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Only one chapter is done, and i'm craving more... something tells me I seriously need to get out more, lol. I love this story though, UPDATE! Oh and just to make reading easier, you might want to have the quotations alone and spaced out so they don't get lost with the paragraphs! |
![]() ![]() Yay! Really good beginning! PLEASE keep writing! |
![]() ![]() I absolutly love it, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutly love it, Lianna is in for a rude awakening. I hope you update soon, this is a wonderfull story. |