That is not true! I'm still reading it and I am impatiently awaiting your next chapter! This was the highlight of my weekend even though I couldn't read it till today because I was on vacation. Anyways I cant wait for your next installment!
Gwen Lyon

I'm still reading it please update!

I enjoyed it! Please update again soon!

hey im reading it... rofl- update soon~

Too lazy to sign in. I'm going to try and write a loong review to make up for all the times I didn't review. First of all, the last part was hilarious. I wonder what the guard was thinking... xD. This chapter really showed the scary side of Lianna. Wow.0_o My fave character's Roux/Zaire. It's a sort of tie. Don't ask; it has to do with the sex scenes they're in. Moving along... just hope you know I need an UPDATE! D I want to know what Lianna's going to do to Roux.
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You're still my idol! Mwahahahaha
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I read it, and I liked it.

this update is good. you changed your name. thank you and please write more.

ohh good chapter please write more! xoxoxooxoxo teamroper

Hello! Okay, I read from about chapter 4 to chapter 28 in the past couple of hours. I figured that I could just read it all and then write one enormous review for you so that you will feel inclined to update sooner.
Now for a few little notes that could improve your writing skills. I only saw one mistake with the use of the form of "to" where you meant to use "too" to show stress instead. Comma usage is generally good. You might want to stay away from -ing and
-ly words. Being forced to not use these words to describe something in your writing and will make you use more descriptive. An example would be instead of saying, "The girl laughed sadisticly" could be turned into, "The girl let out a cackle that could freeze a man's blood in his veins." See, not only does it make the sentence longer, but it makes another image appear in your head to illustrate what is happening. Another thing to try to avoid using so much is "also." It is okay to use it somtimes, but you don't want to go into overkill with it. In the place of also make the two sentences into one so that they are turned from two chopped sentences into a long, flowing one that sounds better when said aloud.
AS to your writing, it is a good style. I hope you don't take my criticisms in the wrong light as I am only trying to help. I make the same mistakes myself sometimes so don't take offence. I have enjoyed this story very, very much and I urge you to continue and update as soon as is humanly possible, please. You may choose to ignore my suggestions if you want, since it is your story, but I do hope that you will consider some of my suggestions as helpful pointers.

What's the slug's name? I have connections, I'm sure we could take care of him. ::wiggles eyebrows::
OMG, I was SO psyched when I saw you updated! I'm addicted to this story. I think it would be PERFECT to pull a "Man in the Iron Mask" and switch the bad king with the good!
If all else fails, CrestenSonora and ZaireLianna can try to escape and run far far away.

OH godie please write more! *gr* I Hate cliffhangers! ARGH! Write more or I shall go CRAZY!

oh oh great chapter update soon!
Roux really...i really would like to see what happens if the tables were turned, but i dont think Lianna would be the same, she'd probably be nice to him instead
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no way, roux actually has feelings, i dont believe it! great chapter, i cant wait 4 more.

oh wow, it just keeps getting better and better! write more soon PLEASE!

i love this story! Omg it is awsome even though you have a few mechanical errors but it waz awsome, write more soon!