Reviews for Flight of the Raven
Jordan Lyga chapter 2 . 8/16/2003
great job, but don't keep us waiting, post again lol. u are a really good writer, so keep going.
Jordan Lyga chapter 1 . 8/15/2003
wow, amazing. You've got me hooked. The only thing that i could find wrong with it is that sometimes you use a word excessively. i only saw that twice and it wasn't a big deal, it just bothered me. O well i love the story and please write more. oh 1 more thing, could you check out my story?

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thanx
Deikon chapter 1 . 8/15/2003
Although the actual story didn't grab me right away (yet, it eventually did further in), the flow of the writing allowed me to continue. You've done well on that part, a part of writing that a lot of people tend to have trouble with the overall style. You've done well with that, and as the story progressed it seems more promising. Keep it up! It looks like it could turn out pretty good!