Reviews for The Adventures of Mary Sue
Miz chapter 1 . 5/25/2005
I commend you on some of your rhytming, but is there a point to this?
jd chapter 1 . 9/19/2003
heehee, aww. this is adorable!

peggy sue -

of hillbilly hue -

mused beneath a tree.

what is life?

a drum? a fife?

or maybe a euphonium.

restless was our peggy,

so tall and fair and leggy,

that she began to stroll.

ambling around the park

was just for fun,

purely a lark

and soon encountered she

a lonely soul.

'whyever you so still be?'

inquired sue,

for grammatic rules

she would forever rue.

'arrghh' said the meagre soul.

'i'm gonna hurl -

get me a bowl!'

'no "please"?'

affronted sue,

'well, jeeze!'

'i'll let you cry -

you mean old witch!'

and after this, a sigh.

hehe, that made absolutely no sense and the rhyme scheme - ok, what rhyme scheme? anyways, hope it gave you a smile. see ya!
Meegwun chapter 1 . 8/17/2003
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH oh man... that is just great...
Katterree Fengari chapter 1 . 8/16/2003
O, that's amusing...the format sorta reminds me of like a children's fairy tale, don't ask how...It seems to have some sort of rhythm in it even tho the stanza's are in lines of 3, which would be uneven, but it's not, except I think the very last line is off...or so it sounds so in my poem