|Reviews for Live|
| Suirenhe chapter 1 . 12/13/2003
sure hits hard
| SpawnMeister666 chapter 1 . 10/2/2003
Nice set of values. I think I've even been known to follow some of them once or twice myself! I hope your not going to try to sue me for breach of copywrite now!
| handle187 chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
So simple, yet so difficult for some to heed. Good job.
| Keeper of the Key chapter 1 . 9/8/2003
So true; this is a great poem!
| Snake-Eyez-The-Great chapter 1 . 9/8/2003
Wow! So true! And it has such a lovely rhythm too! Thanks for the review too!
| thaiswirl chapter 1 . 9/7/2003
wow such true words..great poem with wonderful advice!
| Lidless Eye chapter 1 . 9/6/2003
Very good advice. Great work!
| teh tarik chapter 1 . 9/4/2003
Live. That was beautiful. Continue writing.
| cosmo-queen chapter 1 . 8/23/2003
Excellent poem, excellent message. This was a very inspirational piece. Keep up the great work :)
| Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 8/22/2003
This was some fine advice and you presented it so well.
Heart of the Sword
| LLight chapter 1 . 8/17/2003
makes sense. good poem...
| never enough chapter 1 . 8/16/2003
For in youth comes a certain clarity that wisdom and the years will blur. But be it not a jaded look at the life we live, for you possess the light of the purity no one i know holds.
You wrote a beautiful poem here. I hope you follow these thoughts of yours for they are worthy of alot of respect. Thank you for sharing your gift. Keep writing you have much to offer. Thanks, Shy Girl.