This is sweet, but I think that there are a few lines that don't flow too well. But most of it did. Good job!

A beautiful poem with a touching ending that is something like what I wrote in one of my poems. :) You might want to change the part where the stars protest, "Hey, this sky is ours." I personally feel that it disrupts the smooth flow of the words in the poem. This is just a suggestion, though. The final decision is still based on your own opinions. :)

wow this is a mystical and beautiful poem. very nicely written!

wow.. that's amazing.. i could never write like that

Oh how I envy you! lol. Sorry I havent reviewed in a while, I just moved, and I didnt have internet until now so...sure you dont care, lol. I do think that my writing is getting *somewhat* better, lol. I wrote this odd and slightly morbid song today, but yes again, I'm just rambling, lol. Very nice poem tho.

Lyn