Reviews for Jack
masterofcharacters chapter 8 . 8/30
No! What am I to do now? How can I possibly get jack and what happens with Michael and just all of it off my mind. I must finish reading the story. I can't believe that I just read the last posted chapter. I love your story and am upset that I have to wait to read more, especially since from what I read it takes you a little while to post. *sigh* your story is so great that I have no choice but to keep checking up on it. Please post again as soon as you can and as often as possible. I love this story and really want to read more.
masterofcharacters chapter 7 . 8/30
I love your story. I hate having to stop to fulfill everyday life needs. Haha. Anyways the only thing that I didn't like about this chapter was that at the end when you started the review appreciation, it didn't have a line and it wasn't bold printed so I thought it was part of the chapter at first. It just took a moment to realize what it was. I was also skimming through the review appreciation and saw that you said Alex and Nicole weren't dating, I thought they were, I know that's kind of stupid but I just thought that they were, anyways I can't wait to read more and I'm gonna read this next chapter that's here. Anyways you're doing a great job, I love this story.
masterofcharacters chapter 2 . 8/28
I really like this story. I love how you described the apartment. The only thing was that the switch kind of confused me until I read more into it. I only got to read the first two chapters before bed and can't wait to read more, I want to know more about Jack. That's the only other thing, the chapters are long. Like in real books, which is okay. I guess I just like shorter chapters better because they are easier to read on free time. Anyways the story is great so far, and I can't wait to read more.
Salt and Vinegar Pringles chapter 8 . 6/1/2014
just scrolling through all my old favourites, and Jack popped up! it kills me a little bit to not know what the whole plot entailed! still a great story!
Alexis Eraka chapter 8 . 12/25/2013
Yes, it was good. Though I'm not happy. She could've at least told us how it ended before deciding nothing was salvageable.
Annymask chapter 8 . 11/10/2013
Hi! I just wanted to say that this is just brilliant. I read through the whole thing this weekend and I just think it's completely AMAZING. I love how you have so much detail about her life, but still only relevant details that make the readers experience the story better (hard to explain, but you have described her whole "world" and I have thoroughly enjoyed it). I love the plot idea, it is super interesting :) and I love how you have given a nice story and background to pretty much every character! I don't know how you did this without exhausting my inpatient brain.. But good job! :) this is now on my list of favourite fp stories (which consists of three stories) :) even though it's almost ten years since you updated the story, I hope you might read this anyways and smile BECAUSE YOU TOTALLY DESERVE IT, THIS STORY IS INSANELY GOOD. But yeah. Hopefully you might consider continuing this story if you see this, and if not, good luck with whatever you're doing :) I'll be waiting ;) (but don't feel pressured! XD)
Good luck and well done so far! (It is amazing; I just can't express anything through this review, sadly)
XDXP chapter 8 . 7/3/2013
woah. I got book hangover from this.

Thank you for the AN at the end- it cleared up some things for me.
tolivelaughlove chapter 8 . 4/27/2013
Please update. I want to see how the story unfolds. I have so many ideas but no clue how things will end up or what.
Dominique Diane chapter 8 . 4/4/2013
Alex is being odd. Oh, God! Michael is Jack, everything is so messed up, is he real? Is she dreaming? Please continue, you haven upload in 8 years!
Regards,
Diane
Chamelen37 chapter 8 . 2/17/2013
This. Is. Amazing. I just saw that this was last updated in 2005, so I'm really sad now! I hope that you will one day return to the magical land of Fiction Press and finnnnnnaallllllllly finish this FREAKIN' AMAZING STORY! Please... I'm begging you to pleeeeeaaaaaase Finish. This. Story. It wouldn't just make my day... it would make my life.
R. Ficst chapter 8 . 12/22/2012
Noooooo! Too soon too soon! I've been cut off too soon! Do you think you could maybe even just post a summary of what's supposed to happen if you plan to never come back to it? I want to know 'n'
R. Ficst chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
Oooo you're making me love this and hate this... because I see that you last updated in 2005, and it's not marked "completed," so I'm just going to get cut off at some point, and I can tell you I love it already.

I'm going to read as much as I can, and click "follow" on the off chance that you might one day return.
LivinLyfe2TheFullest chapter 8 . 4/21/2011
NO theres no more chapters at this point *sniffle sniffle* :'(

i love this story and your idea for it, its so cool :D

btw i'm supposed to tell you if i want to be alerted of a new chapter right?

PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE UPDATE SOON! :D
LivinLyfe2TheFullest chapter 3 . 4/21/2011
omg this would be so cool but depressing if it was based on a true story

like having an imaginary friend though theyre and adult and when you graduate from high school they disapear and you hurt and never feel quite as full again

btw does elise know about something? cuz i think she does with like that book she gave Nicole and that other person is Jack

i really wish you finish this story but probably not gonna happen :(
techno96 chapter 8 . 4/1/2011
AGH! I love this story. You are such an amazing writer, especially how you described how sitting in the patio was like and that almost French like market place. It was one of my favorite parts, makes me want to live in New York. AND, I love Alex! He is such an awesome characters, all of the characters are awesome AND original. Anyway...I noticed you haven't updated in awhile...ahem...more like 6 years...ahem. And I am telling you write now...YOU NEED TO UPDATE SON! LIKE SON! LIKE REALLY SOON!...pwease...

techno96
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