Reviews for Why Can't You?
Alhana Starbreeze chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
This is soo sad, yet it happens alot doesn't it? I really like this poem because it says exactly what's goin' on. And yes I do see it! ;)~Star~
D chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
the first of your political/religion pieces, this makes as a good intrduction to your later work on such topics.D.
Chaotic Wolf chapter 1 . 9/7/2003
Mary has the same size as Marilyn


She put her fingers in the imprints

at Mann's chinese theater show

she could have been a movie star

never got the chance to go that far

her life was stole, oh oh, now we'll

never know...
persephone's catharsis chapter 1 . 8/17/2003
First i wanna say thanx for review my poem. I've always been a writer but am new to this. It is nice to hear peoples opinions. I really love this poem. It is very deep and true which I find hard to find in poetry today. It was great.
Katz' Shadows chapter 1 . 8/17/2003
Very powerful. I like it. It makes you think...and these are things everyone needs to think about at one time or another.

Oh, and thanks for reviewing my poem!