Reviews for Ruby Red Soul Of Eyes
Bob Story Builder chapter 1 . 3/11/2016
Love the imagery throughout the poem. The image of the north star burning and bleeding is explosive. I think of a red moon but that isn't the what this is. "My heart is a frozen sea" is vibrant and echoes loneliness. It's my favorite line hands down. I'm a sucker for romance poems probably because I have never had a relationship and love has always fascinated me as a writer and human being.
Isca chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
"My lovers are nothing more than photographs." Well, that sums up precisely how I feel all of the time...staring at the pictures of loved ones...fearing that I'll lose them...

The repetition of, "The north star bleeds and burns" was magnificent! It's a catchy line! :)
Malicena Tzorcelan chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
This poem is beautiful, You write with your whole soul and it shows. I like your poems very much!

D chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
Summr days, dreaming of winter.D.
Unholy Haven chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
So lovely and lonely.
AboveTheSalt chapter 1 . 10/11/2004
After being on this site for over a year, this poem still ranks in the top 3 of things I've read. Something about it just strikes me in a way little other writing has. I keep coming back to it and see a new side of it's beauty every time. Thank you so much for writing this, as I'm not sure you could know how much I really love this piece if I didn't tell you. Wonderful, again. Thanks.
AboveTheSalt chapter 1 . 10/18/2003
The north star bleeds and burns...

Stunning. Impressive visuals. I'm really enjoying your work. The part about the photographs and such... that too was very eloquently expressed.

"beneath the night and somewhere south of happiness." I just love it.

(by the way, i absolutely love your pen name.)
emrldeyedragon chapter 1 . 8/17/2003
Wow! That's REALLY good! Keep up the writing!

By the way.. if you have time plz review my stuff!