Reviews for Breaking the Silence
Faythe chapter 1 . 10/27/2003
This reminded me of 'Stay Together For the Kids' by Blink 182... I can't put my finger on what it was that reminded me of that song though. It's a compliment, seeing as that's the only decent song they ever did :oP

I liked some of the imagery & meanings behind this... very interesting ideas scattered throughout the whole piece. Good stuff.
Shadafakup chapter 1 . 8/27/2003
This was great..

Clear and precise lyrics, that hold a lot of emotion and truth in them..

I certainly can relate..

Rhythm and tempo of this piece sounds great too.. My guess is you have chords or something for this..

Love the way it flows, as well as the theme of the piece..

Some of the phrases used were fantastic.. So haunting, so moving and so painfully true..

The chorus was awesome.. "House full of ghosts".. Pun intended?

Well anyway, nice piece, I certainly enjoyed it..

i was a postcard chapter 1 . 8/22/2003
Very, very clever lyrics. I'd love to hear the music that accompanies this. The song exudes pain and angst, and it really touched me. (Not literally of course. That'd be wierd.) Some lines seemed a bit out of place; they were too...oh I'm not sure how to put it. Sorry. :) Wonderful work!
Deana Bell chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
I like your style, and you convey the theme well. Great title.

~God bless~
Jay Lee chapter 1 . 8/17/2003
Hey... Not bad...