Reviews for No time left
Nev Jee chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
Your words are so simple and bitter- sweet that they sound profound and very complete at the same time. It's hard to do that... I've learned.
i was a postcard chapter 1 . 8/22/2003
You have no idea how much this song applies to me. As they say, it "spoke to me." And it's very...contained. As in, it's like, when I read this, I feel like I'm in a different world for a moment; a melancholy world.

Your wording is excellent. Some sentences broke funny, though. And a spelling error or two is in it. But other than that, this is a quiet, gentle masterpiece. :)
Enter The Coil chapter 1 . 8/21/2003
oh i love this one, very VERY awesome. And your structure was amazing (i suck at structure lol) ah well, anyway, brilliant! **Muah!*

shauna

P.S.-Thanks for reviewing one of my songs _