Reviews for Boy and Girl
amharte chapter 3 . 5/5/2004
A dream is the continuation of reality, and reality is the end of a dream. Wow. It confuses me but I like it!
decree of fate chapter 1 . 1/12/2004
Definitely different. I love it! :)
xeniamaria chapter 3 . 1/12/2004
weird, but very nicely done!
amharte chapter 2 . 8/26/2003
that was cute... except for it might have had more effect if the girl at the end had said "forever" instead of repeating the word day, to make it stand out more
FamousOneLiners chapter 2 . 8/20/2003
the last two lines are complete genius, and the other lines are humorous

but dare i ask, will all the chaps have this similar format?

cause that would be interesting in it's own way
T. Riddle chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
Hmm..that was weird. It seems pointless, but none the less entertaining. Is there more? Very unique way of writing, tho.
amharte chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
sort of weird but intersting idea...

strange grammatical structure n stuff

i liked the sand/desert thing!

wonder why you wrote this though
FamousOneLiners chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
original beginning