Reviews for The Undelivered Poem
BecomingMyself chapter 1 . 1/19/2004
Well written poem and great story line with awful twist in the end!
Subtle rhyming to get the flow in, building tension, giving some indications by telling a story in general expressions, and even in the end the confession is not really recalling what has happened to the girl...
I can see you are a great writer, with some twisted stories though!
Great poem!
Trinity Joselyn Carter chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
:O omg that was a great poem!