Reviews for A Pair Of Fallen Angels
dumdedumdum333 chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
badly written, i don't know what they looked like or anything. bad plot, boring and rather abrupt.
Traciana Mahogany chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
Well...I absolutely adore the plot. Adore it to death. I've always been a huge fan of every type of Cinderella story out there...that's what drew me in...the whole promise of a fairy tell ending.

Speaking of the ending, I didn't really understand the last line. What are you saying? That they're fallen angels? What does that have to do with the rest of the plot?

And the overall writing was rather abrupt, leaving no room for interpretation. And also the abruptness sort of drew away from the plot, leaving you with out much but a dry plate of facts about these two random people who you feel you don't know at all...Perhaps embelishing a bit more on the characters instead of giving facts and then following along with a slow action. But that's just my suggestion.

It was a lovely try...And please don't think I'm being cruel. Like I said, I simply adored the plot.

Toodles.

Trixy