Reviews for example
Topaz Waters chapter 1 . 10/4/2003
Chillingly omnious...
obsidian katana chapter 1 . 9/20/2003
great poem! i really like this, especially the first and second lines. wonderfully written. nice work. keep it up!
handle187 chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
swirlygirl chapter 1 . 9/7/2003
i like this one and a lot of the others so on my fav authors you
Paradoxical Goddess chapter 1 . 8/31/2003
oh i really really like this one. my only concrit would be this: i think it would sound better like this-

the smalles of her children

has the largest eyes

so that way it's one child we can focus on
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 8/22/2003
I liked this.

~Heart of the Sword