|Reviews for example|
| Topaz Waters chapter 1 . 10/4/2003
| obsidian katana chapter 1 . 9/20/2003
great poem! i really like this, especially the first and second lines. wonderfully written. nice work. keep it up!
| handle187 chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
| swirlygirl chapter 1 . 9/7/2003
i like this one and a lot of the others so on my fav authors you go..lol
| Paradoxical Goddess chapter 1 . 8/31/2003
oh i really really like this one. my only concrit would be this: i think it would sound better like this-
the smalles of her children
has the largest eyes
so that way it's one child we can focus on
| Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 8/22/2003
I liked this.
~Heart of the Sword