Reviews for The Dark Plan
anonymous chapter 1 . 1/24/2008
You never know what the future holds, and you never know what things can happen to the person. I've seen people who have broken up 10 years ago on bad terms when they had loved each other meet back up and fall right back in love even stronger than before and spent the rest of their lives together. So don't ever give up hope, if you haven't already. I bet you two haven't even talked to or seen each other for years. I don't know how you feel about her now, he vise versa, but I bet you anything that at least one of you, if not both, still think about one another because of the love still there. Just something to think about.
Raylume chapter 1 . 8/19/2003
i liked it as an overall view, some of it lacked flow but the same stuff happends with mine because i want them to think about this or that. It is true the intention was pure, and is a common thing for those who truly love to do. Noble in a way but in the same respect cowardise, i like the flow and the way that it progress along the line. i like the use of most of the words all except for thee. other then that i dig i like, good job the inspiration did you well