|Reviews for Life|
| Locked Up Secrets chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
It's a beautiful idea and I love how bold and expressive you are. However, the thoughts are slightly disjointed and there's no punctuation except for in two places, in the middle of the poem and at the end, which makes it read as basically one whole sentence. With a bit of editing, this piece could be excellent.
| Moroni's Daughter chapter 1 . 9/20/2004
This is beautiful. I don't know how you do it.
| snookems chapter 1 . 1/17/2001
Awesome stuff! I love your poems. I love poems that are religious to. :):)
| BobbtheElf chapter 1 . 1/10/2001
oooooooooooooooo . . . Kudos to you. I really like this one. *Bobb's stamp of approval*
| Angel Wing2 chapter 1 . 12/23/2000
This is a very good poem. I really like it.
| PM20 chapter 1 . 12/12/2000
I like it, but its kinda sad
| AngelGirl chapter 1 . 12/12/2000
oooh... i *really* like this! very good! :)
| Alexis Rockford chapter 1 . 12/12/2000
weird . . .