Reviews for Crying
swirlygirl chapter 1 . 8/24/2003
very nice kinda sad though...
handle187 chapter 1 . 8/22/2003
And snow the dandriff

It always makes me wonder

Does God use shampoo?
Mime chapter 1 . 8/21/2003
I love it when it rains, especially since I live in hot 'n sunny south Calif. Awesome haiku!
Indigo-Andie chapter 1 . 8/20/2003
in this poem crying almost seems like a sweet thing to do. i always thought of rain as the angels tears...well nice haiku!
Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 8/19/2003
Wow, that's really good! Haiku's are hard and they all turn out horrible for me, but this one is really good. Bravo!
AutumnRhapsody chapter 1 . 8/19/2003
Would there be an apostrophe: god's? And there should maybe be a semicolon after the second line, but for poetry it's obviously not necessary.

I like the imagery, you can really imagine it, and although rain coming down while crying is done a lot, it seems different, lovely, and new somehow in this poem.
willowzbitch chapter 1 . 8/19/2003
simple,sad and sweet! great haiku