Congratulations, one good story on this site. Sorry. Great story!

Hehe, this is t3h funnies. I do approve/enjoy, please continue :)

lol, aw, that's so cute! I don't know why I just thought of this, but your story mad me thing of goth oompa loompas, lol. anyway, i love the descriptivness of the story, and the fact that it seems like you took your time writing and didn't rush at any points. good story, write more!

I like how, in the first chapter, it goes back to saying that peeps say the tunnels are haunted. The oompa loompas in this story seems SLIGHTLY less comical than those in the movie though... lol...