That's so great, Heather! I loved it! I had to come read it since you told me at the party. _ Its great...and you got the idea in the shower. That makes it even greater. You are the only person I know that would get a poem idea in the shower. hehe. TJ and Lex say hello. Bye bye Docks

hey i really like this! i just chose it at randome so icould tell you i've written more on Feria Luna Week (it's titled Santuario Harbour) but then i read it. i have a bit of a horse fettish that i never grew out of, and this appeals. lovely imagery.

I think it is great. And maybe a reason for twele could be the amount of months per year. And the number of steeds leaving go wiht the number of months associated with the certian season that your poem is on. I think it is great even if you didn't realize you did that. In the shower huh? Must have been an interesting shower.

this is pretty good...

but this part:

Ten silver horses stand around my bed,

With curtains of the deepest red.

I look around and then I see,

Eight remain of those silver steeds.

Casting around mine eyes did find,

That everything would be just fine.

shouldn't that eight be nine? And it was kinda weird how you jumped from 5 horses to three... and before that the same thing.. but i guess it was just to make it the length you wanted... well all in all it's good