Reviews for Forever
Laineniel chapter 2 . 3/13/2004
These are both really cool. I like the couplet style that you use and then leave and then come back to. It adds variety (is that spelled correctly? i can't spell today) Well done on an emotionally filled piece!
~Laineniel
Val Mora chapter 1 . 11/22/2003
I love the rhythm and rhyme of this poem - it's so beautiful. Actually, it rather reminds me of E. 's work, for no apparent reason (maybe because the rhyme is that good). It's really gorgeous. _

Thanks for your review!
Siberia82 chapter 1 . 9/15/2003
Wow, that was very profound and introspective. The format is very orginal. You express yourself beautifully.
The intellect chapter 1 . 8/20/2003
i'm feeling very wierd today(not in a good way)

i can TOTALLY relate to this, i hate it when people say that as ur proberly thinkin, u know nothing about the situation in question...

wel, very emotinal... im crying at the moment... i thought this was very wel brought together... love it... ur on my favourites

the intellect