Reviews for Heartbroken
Mime chapter 1 . 8/21/2003
I can imagine the heart breaking so vividly...great job!
willowzbitch chapter 1 . 8/21/2003
aw :( thats so sad, but a great haiku! you need to write more haikus!
AutumnRhapsody chapter 1 . 8/20/2003
Is the third line a typo, w/the repeat of "know"?

I like how it's basically one sentence, and the tone is very haiku-y to me. Good job.
Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 8/20/2003
Wow, another great Haiku! Keep it up!