|Reviews for Heartbroken|
| Mime chapter 1 . 8/21/2003
I can imagine the heart breaking so vividly...great job!
| willowzbitch chapter 1 . 8/21/2003
aw :( thats so sad, but a great haiku! you need to write more haikus!
| AutumnRhapsody chapter 1 . 8/20/2003
Is the third line a typo, w/the repeat of "know"?
I like how it's basically one sentence, and the tone is very haiku-y to me. Good job.
| Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 8/20/2003
Wow, another great Haiku! Keep it up!