Reviews for Void
Janelle MaCracken chapter 1 . 4/9/2004
I like this poem but I think that maybe you should branch out and use less everyday words, not saying you have to be a thesaures whore. Just maybe every few lines throw in a really descriptive word one thats super specific to what your talking about, one that sounds or feels like the subject.
I.E...words like slither, round, slice.
Things that invoke stronger images.
-m
Destria chapter 1 . 8/20/2003
The words, the flow, the 'movement'. The poem, i loved it. Can't wait to read more! Good Work!