Reviews for Void
Janelle MaCracken chapter 1 . 4/9/2004
I like this poem but I think that maybe you should branch out and use less everyday words, not saying you have to be a thesaures whore. Just maybe every few lines throw in a really descriptive word one thats super specific to what your talking about, one that sounds or feels like the subject.
I.E...words like slither, round, slice.
Things that invoke stronger images.
Destria chapter 1 . 8/20/2003
The words, the flow, the 'movement'. The poem, i loved it. Can't wait to read more! Good Work!