|Reviews for Tormented Skies|
| Luminous Blane chapter 7 . 10/30/2003
this is NOT kickin. it's not high gear kickin. it's full throttle kickin!
| Luminous Blane chapter 6 . 9/30/2003
...I LOVE YOUR WRITING! IF IT WERE A WOMAN, SHE'D HAVE A FULLY LOADED ARSENAL!...ok, so that sounded stupid. good work as always!...actually, she'd probably just be antigone with a.c.'s guns... I forget what they were called, but they're the ones attatched to his arms. also, she'd be a ghost and physical psychic somehow... I'm tired of reviewing this chapter now, so now I must vanish mysteriously, as is my way. *POOF!*
| Luminous Blane chapter 5 . 9/15/2003
...RAY CAN DO IT! HE'S DA BOMB! speaking of which, he'd make a good air force, corresponding to the one man army of a.c... they also need a navy... and marines...
| Luminous Blane chapter 4 . 9/15/2003
...I WANT ONE OF THOSE!
| Luminous Blane chapter 3 . 9/15/2003
I guess that's funny but he's kinda mean about that... then again, they tried to kill him.
| Luminous Blane chapter 1 . 9/15/2003
...I want one. what's a craft like that go for, anyway?
| Alicia chapter 2 . 8/31/2003
Hey, this is a really good start to a great story. Keep it up. :)
| Kayla chapter 2 . 8/24/2003
Ahh it's intense.. the suspense is killing me, Josh, please write more!
I love the way this guy is death-defying and thrill-seeking.. sounds a bit like me.
| firemounrain chapter 1 . 8/21/2003
Who could resist an offer like that?
I like the beginnings-of-sentences. They sound like home. ;)
Gotta love the speed demon.
If you've got the time, I've got two short stories with zip reviews.
The paint is peeling, dear...
| crucify my sanity chapter 1 . 8/21/2003
awesome description and intriguing imagery, you've got my attention.
| Kayla chapter 1 . 8/21/2003
Awesome aircraft.. jeepers, I love the way you write.. it's like those Harry Potter books.. once I start, I think.. hmm... I'll just read a little bit more, then I end up reading like 5 chapters more.
| Josh chapter 1 . 8/21/2003
hey great story keep writing