|Reviews for Memories of the Past|
| storygirl412 chapter 1 . 10/23/2005
I really like this . . . its wishful, although just the over all tone is slighly frail, but for the most part paints a great picture! Please review my other stuff too, I appreciate your imput!
| SilverWolfTheory chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
That is a great poem!I really liked it!Keep up the good work.
By the way; thank you for reviewing my story, The Last Duchess. I read in your profile that you read Harry Potter. Well, if you also read Harry Potter-Fan Fiction, you should read my story at , Harry Potter and the Gaurdians of Hogwarts by MissHazelEyes
| BushyHaired chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
That's just brilliant! I loved it. Especially the 'caress my soul'. It's great.
| Robert-Andrew-Frogg chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
I like the idea of water as memories, something like a river... sadly the river of my own memories seems to have a damn in it somewhere because I find it very hard to remember a lot.
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 9/11/2004
Very nicely done. Brief, yet touching. -m-
p.s. minor nits—
And as the serene breeze(s)
Caress my soul,
Consider bringing the reader back to your beginning at the end with something like—
I start to reminisce
Like water's ripple,
Cannot be retrieved.
| Love of hate chapter 1 . 1/12/2004
I really enjoied this poem. It gives you really cool mental immages and you have to think about it. I really liked 'And as the serene breeze
Caress my soul' It represents everything really well.
| the fourth wheel chapter 1 . 11/23/2003
Nice poem. Good job
| Whispers Of You chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
i loved it. U just amaze me, u seem to be able to convey such a lot of feeling and emotions in ur poems without using so many words... I mean it makes the end result so unusual from the poetry i read usually.. This poem sorta gives a feeligns of keeping ur memories, a slight hint of sadness but still not the deep regret u see accompanying the usual reminiscing peoms.. Well done.. luv ur poetry gurl, its one to keep in mind 4 a long time
| Melancholy Butterfly chapter 1 . 8/24/2003
A very enchanting and soothing poem. Well done.